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Comment from Bill Schott
This tercet suite, Let Me Love You, has the proper formatting and assembles several offers of association that should break down all defenses. .......
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This tercet suite, Let Me Love You, has the proper formatting and assembles several offers of association that should break down all defenses. .......
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this gorgeous poem and presentation with us. The Songs are Soloman are beautiful and your take on them is also. You did them justice and your presentation was wonderful.Â
stars and stops for you (here did you mean 'starts and stops' with you???)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this gorgeous poem and presentation with us. The Songs are Soloman are beautiful and your take on them is also. You did them justice and your presentation was wonderful.Â
stars and stops for you (here did you mean 'starts and stops' with you???)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I meant to write, "starts and stops for you" I fixed it.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
Your poem is full of excitement and passion. I love your words. I remember feeling the way you write, a long time ago.
Note: did you mean every beat (starts) and stops for you?
Excellent poem, Gypsy.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
Your poem is full of excitement and passion. I love your words. I remember feeling the way you write, a long time ago.
Note: did you mean every beat (starts) and stops for you?
Excellent poem, Gypsy.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Cindy. Yes, I meant, "starts and stops", someone else let me know and it's fixed. 😊
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
great imagery in this
with the sun warming one's touch
and the wind carrying the love
and the rushing river. . .
love the rushing river part. . .
thank you for sharing!!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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great imagery in this
with the sun warming one's touch
and the wind carrying the love
and the rushing river. . .
love the rushing river part. . .
thank you for sharing!!
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A sweet and flowing love story in which the narrator's deep emotions become subsumed in nature's essence and beauty. Love conquers everything. Thanks for sharing your elegant, magical verse. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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A sweet and flowing love story in which the narrator's deep emotions become subsumed in nature's essence and beauty. Love conquers everything. Thanks for sharing your elegant, magical verse. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Begin Again
Forgive me, Gypsy, since I am not good with poetry, but your poem touched me as I followed the pieces of nature blending with the soul of God's creation... our love for him and his for us. We must give ourselves to him to be blessed for eternity.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Forgive me, Gypsy, since I am not good with poetry, but your poem touched me as I followed the pieces of nature blending with the soul of God's creation... our love for him and his for us. We must give ourselves to him to be blessed for eternity.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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You are correct 😊
Thank you very much, Carol
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
We are created by the Grand I Am. Your Tercet brings this out and speak of your personal acknowledgment of this belief. Your second to last stanza, I believe, should read, 'starts and stops'. Thanks for sharing this well illustrated poem
RJ
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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We are created by the Grand I Am. Your Tercet brings this out and speak of your personal acknowledgment of this belief. Your second to last stanza, I believe, should read, 'starts and stops'. Thanks for sharing this well illustrated poem
RJ
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. The error is fixed.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
We are created by the Grand I Am. Your Tercet brings this out and speak of your personal acknowledgment of this belief. Your second to last stanza, I believe, should read, 'starts and stops'. Thanks for sharing this well illustrated poem
RJ
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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We are created by the Grand I Am. Your Tercet brings this out and speak of your personal acknowledgment of this belief. Your second to last stanza, I believe, should read, 'starts and stops'. Thanks for sharing this well illustrated poem
RJ
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This has such a peaceful, prayer-like feel to it. Very soothing and delightful both to read and to look at. My husband and I have one of the verses from the Song of Solomon engraved in Hebrew onto our wedding bands: "I am my Beloved's and my Beloved is mine."
Two tiny spags, Gypsy:
to carry my longing
on it(')s wings
and also:
know that every beat
star(t)s and stops for you.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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This has such a peaceful, prayer-like feel to it. Very soothing and delightful both to read and to look at. My husband and I have one of the verses from the Song of Solomon engraved in Hebrew onto our wedding bands: "I am my Beloved's and my Beloved is mine."
Two tiny spags, Gypsy:
to carry my longing
on it(')s wings
and also:
know that every beat
star(t)s and stops for you.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle for the lovelyand helpful review. The errors are fixed, thank you.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Sugarray77
This is exquisitely crafted. The longing and yearning for her love is so poignant and your verses amplify it and examine it as a tangible thing. So well done, Gypsy.
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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This is exquisitely crafted. The longing and yearning for her love is so poignant and your verses amplify it and examine it as a tangible thing. So well done, Gypsy.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Melissa
Gypsy 😊
