Time to Fly
2-4-6-8 Poem6 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A nice rhythmic rendition here about our migratory birds and what they tell us about changes in temperatures and ultimately in the seasons- another manifestation of Mother Nature at work.
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A nice rhythmic rendition here about our migratory birds and what they tell us about changes in temperatures and ultimately in the seasons- another manifestation of Mother Nature at work.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. I think with just a few words you share a story. Reading deeper it makes you think about the passage of time. Well done!
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I thought this was well written. I think with just a few words you share a story. Reading deeper it makes you think about the passage of time. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 2-4-6-8 writing prompt. I enjoyed your addition of the Loop poem format to this poem. Beatiful art work to go with your presentation. Thanks for sharing
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An excellent entry for the 2-4-6-8 writing prompt. I enjoyed your addition of the Loop poem format to this poem. Beatiful art work to go with your presentation. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line loop poem, Time to Fly, has the proper formatting and follows the flock as the weather dictates the direction of the future efforts. ..
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This four-line loop poem, Time to Fly, has the proper formatting and follows the flock as the weather dictates the direction of the future efforts. ..
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from RodG
You must live farther north than I, Poet, as the geese around here will hang nearby for another month or so. You have written a Loop poem that clearly portrays their upcoming flight. Rod
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You must live farther north than I, Poet, as the geese around here will hang nearby for another month or so. You have written a Loop poem that clearly portrays their upcoming flight. Rod
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Now the geese have the right idea...I do not have any yearning to have the cold weather return though of course, I know it will, Maybe if Ihad those wings, I could fly. LOl
Smiles, Carol
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Now the geese have the right idea...I do not have any yearning to have the cold weather return though of course, I know it will, Maybe if Ihad those wings, I could fly. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024