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The Body Problem

Can anyone else relate?

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Comment from F. William Lester
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A question most of us ask ourselves too often, driven by the demands of a shallow society. True beauty lies deep within us. Don't trouble yourself with what others think. Be true to yourself. Wonderfully written. Good luck in the contest. Be well.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

Comment from papa55mike
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It is a double-edged sword, especially in terms of the feelings we feel for our bodies after 60--or 68, in my case. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Our bodies sometimes lack care and we need to respect ourselves and make good choices when it comes to food and exercise. We become lazy as we age and often don't make an effort. To maintain good health means some self sacrifice. Looking after every aspect of our body is an ongoing task, I enjoyed your perspective here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024