2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Gypsy. I am especially fond of 'The Raven' and think that Poe's creativity, rhymes and meter are masterfully used to bring a bit of spooky to a relatively 'benign' theme. For a Halloween poem, it's not very spooky. I borrowed his cadence and meter and wrote a poem a few years ago. So fun. Great job on this one.
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Gypsy. I am especially fond of 'The Raven' and think that Poe's creativity, rhymes and meter are masterfully used to bring a bit of spooky to a relatively 'benign' theme. For a Halloween poem, it's not very spooky. I borrowed his cadence and meter and wrote a poem a few years ago. So fun. Great job on this one.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I love 'the Raven' poem. Edgar Allen Poe's Poetry was beatifuly composed and mysterious...sometimes creepy. Dean kuch read the poem to me.... it was wonderful. He loved the way Poe wrote and Dean followed his style.
Thank you very much, Melissa
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
That raven's eyes look shifty. My youngest son, Stevenw as an avid reader. His favorite authors were, Shakespeare, Dr. Suess, and Edgar Allen Poe. He used to call Poe, the psycho dude from Balitmore. I never really understood Poe's poetry. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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That raven's eyes look shifty. My youngest son, Stevenw as an avid reader. His favorite authors were, Shakespeare, Dr. Suess, and Edgar Allen Poe. He used to call Poe, the psycho dude from Balitmore. I never really understood Poe's poetry. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Your son has good taste in poetry. Dr Seuss, poetry, and Shakespeare.
Thank you very much , Barbara
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....a part II poem, a continuation of the great Poe's masterpiece. He was one freaky dude, that's for sure. His mind was a scary place, that's for sure
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....a part II poem, a continuation of the great Poe's masterpiece. He was one freaky dude, that's for sure. His mind was a scary place, that's for sure
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is wonderful, Gypsy, and it rhymes which I love with that evocative 'rapping and tapping.' What a verse he wrote but yours sums it up so succinctly whilst his drags on a bit:)) Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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This is wonderful, Gypsy, and it rhymes which I love with that evocative 'rapping and tapping.' What a verse he wrote but yours sums it up so succinctly whilst his drags on a bit:)) Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is well written poem based on Poe's Raven. It is one of the better follow ups or continuation perspectives that I have read to date. It is expressive and descriptive while meeting the criteria of the Imayo poetic form.
Well done, very creative.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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This is well written poem based on Poe's Raven. It is one of the better follow ups or continuation perspectives that I have read to date. It is expressive and descriptive while meeting the criteria of the Imayo poetic form.
Well done, very creative.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words
Gypsy hugs 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Katiemae1977
This is a great poem Gypsy. The Raven will certainly live on forevermore.
I'm having a little trouble with my entry. Can't seem to get it to flow well.
I like the second stanza the best.
Awesome job!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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This is a great poem Gypsy. The Raven will certainly live on forevermore.
I'm having a little trouble with my entry. Can't seem to get it to flow well.
I like the second stanza the best.
Awesome job!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much,
Katiemae
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from l.raven
Hi Marival, Poe was a strange bird...and
The Raven was his #1 poem written...
he took it to the grave ...
I haven't read it in a very long time...
but I remember every word spoken...
very well written my wonderful friend..
I love your poem...and so love your pictures...
love you...Linda xxoo
so good to see you sweet girl...
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Hi Marival, Poe was a strange bird...and
The Raven was his #1 poem written...
he took it to the grave ...
I haven't read it in a very long time...
but I remember every word spoken...
very well written my wonderful friend..
I love your poem...and so love your pictures...
love you...Linda xxoo
so good to see you sweet girl...
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I haven't heard from you in a long time, how are you? I hope all is well.
Thank you very much, Linda 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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took this summer to catch up on
things I have wanted to do for a
long time...so much around the house...
doing well...just the aches and pains
of growing old...LOL...
and your so very welcome my sweet friend...love you...xxoo 🌼🌼🌼🌻🌻🤗❤️🙏🙏
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, Poe is forever remembered for that particular poem which is so fantastically written and so memorable. I like your tribute to Poe and his best known poem. His stories are memorable, too!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Yes, Poe is forever remembered for that particular poem which is so fantastically written and so memorable. I like your tribute to Poe and his best known poem. His stories are memorable, too!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Yes, I like his work. Did you know he suffered from depression? His death was sad and mysterious.
Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ marival ❤️
Comment from GWHARGIS
Poe was the Stephen King of his time. Setting images of supernatural and terrifying things in people's minds. His writings will live on. Your poem was a wonderful tribute to the late great Edgar Allen Poe. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Poe was the Stephen King of his time. Setting images of supernatural and terrifying things in people's minds. His writings will live on. Your poem was a wonderful tribute to the late great Edgar Allen Poe. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I like that, the stephen king of his time, only depressed and morbid... poor man. I'm a bigfan of stephen king.
Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
the fs gremlins have dropped some AAAAAAAAAAA crumbs again LOL
great dedication to poe and his pet raven
love the second line as it continues to tap tap tap on the door...
cool imayo! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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the fs gremlins have dropped some AAAAAAAAAAA crumbs again LOL
great dedication to poe and his pet raven
love the second line as it continues to tap tap tap on the door...
cool imayo! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs 😊
