Free Spirit.
I believe, the soul can't fly - if it ain't born again.5 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this, your lovely, conversational speech and your heartfelt plea to try and intervene with fate and set your own conditions. If only! Fun and original, thank you. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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I like this, your lovely, conversational speech and your heartfelt plea to try and intervene with fate and set your own conditions. If only! Fun and original, thank you. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love the gentle tone of your poem. It's a touching piece that beautifully shares the desire for a final farewell on the perfect day like you have described. It's a gentle message of hope and readiness. Lovely work!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I love the gentle tone of your poem. It's a touching piece that beautifully shares the desire for a final farewell on the perfect day like you have described. It's a gentle message of hope and readiness. Lovely work!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Glad you enjoyed it: And thanks! For your touching review.
Comment from Nicki Nance
I did enjoy this one. I felt as though I had walked into a very intimate conversation. It was also thought provoking. I wonder if people consider their readiness to cross to the beyond.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I did enjoy this one. I felt as though I had walked into a very intimate conversation. It was also thought provoking. I wonder if people consider their readiness to cross to the beyond.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Sad thing, I believe most people - don't give the after life a first or second thought; they'd rather die unready and then it's too late. Glad you enjoyed this poem and thanks! For the review.
Comment from jessizero
I really liked this one! I think many people could relate to this. I liked that you didn't use "proper" English in this one. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I really liked this one! I think many people could relate to this. I liked that you didn't use "proper" English in this one. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Real poetry requires hardly no editing, and the way you see it in your minds eye, is the way you write it down on paper; don't think about it so much - just let it out naturally. Thanks, for your review and the kind words.
Comment from Begin Again
It made me think of the choir on Sunday morning, with their feet stomping and their hands clapping as they sang "Hallelujah--Praise the Lord." We need to know that we better always be ready because when the Lord says it's your time, I don't think he will wait. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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It made me think of the choir on Sunday morning, with their feet stomping and their hands clapping as they sang "Hallelujah--Praise the Lord." We need to know that we better always be ready because when the Lord says it's your time, I don't think he will wait. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Glad you enjoyed this piece: Thanks, for the review.
