Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Aliss Victim or Sleuth?"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
3 total reviews
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Congratulations on a milestone post! This is such an interesting story that leaves me with more questions than answers. We as readers need a read like that sometimes. Good work and thanks for sharing! Happy writing!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on a milestone post! This is such an interesting story that leaves me with more questions than answers. We as readers need a read like that sometimes. Good work and thanks for sharing! Happy writing!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your review - I will be posting more in my book. Please follow and read more!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, very interesting. I'm guessing a spouse shouldn't have secrets or trust.
notes:
Ploop! Straight into the chest of the person walking behind her.
- A bit odd the dog didn't alert her in some way.
Is the one of the last secrets her husband has?
-reread this sentence
Hmm... the box is empty. Nothing in it. Weird. Why keep and empty box locked in a drawer?
- Are these her thoughts or the narrator?
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Hmm, very interesting. I'm guessing a spouse shouldn't have secrets or trust.
notes:
Ploop! Straight into the chest of the person walking behind her.
- A bit odd the dog didn't alert her in some way.
Is the one of the last secrets her husband has?
-reread this sentence
Hmm... the box is empty. Nothing in it. Weird. Why keep and empty box locked in a drawer?
- Are these her thoughts or the narrator?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Ahh thank you. should I use '...' for thoughts?
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I think italics work best.
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Excellent suggestion!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your 50th post! This chapter is gripping! I loved how the tension built as Aliss continued her secretive journey. The revelation of the photograph was a fantastic twist! This is an enjoyable read, and I'm excited to see where the story goes next. Great job on keeping the suspense alive!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Congrats on your 50th post! This chapter is gripping! I loved how the tension built as Aliss continued her secretive journey. The revelation of the photograph was a fantastic twist! This is an enjoyable read, and I'm excited to see where the story goes next. Great job on keeping the suspense alive!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Michael - I look forward to your reviews!