Precious Eyes
We who are lucky are born with this gift.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The imagery of your eyes as windows to the soul and guides through life is both so beautiful. The closing linesare so hopeful. I found this to be a heartfelt tribute to the importance of vision and the role it plays in our lives.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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The imagery of your eyes as windows to the soul and guides through life is both so beautiful. The closing linesare so hopeful. I found this to be a heartfelt tribute to the importance of vision and the role it plays in our lives.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Yes, I often thought what sense would I most hate to lose, and I concluded it would be sight. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from RodG
The Speaker discusses how she uses her eyes to see the world around her, read favorite books, and express her emotions. I find your use of seven-line stanzas and nine syllable lines intriguing. Rod
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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The Speaker discusses how she uses her eyes to see the world around her, read favorite books, and express her emotions. I find your use of seven-line stanzas and nine syllable lines intriguing. Rod
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the read and the insight into the structure. Appreciated.