Soaring spirits
A poem written in slang5 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Your poem proves a point...We don't have to speak perfectly or be from the upper side of town to be able to talk of God, of love, of kindness. Slang can say it just as well.
Smiles, Carol
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Your poem proves a point...We don't have to speak perfectly or be from the upper side of town to be able to talk of God, of love, of kindness. Slang can say it just as well.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your words are so beautiful. I felt that it was a wish for a world where there is more kindness. It's a touching and inspiring call for God to be a part of our lives. I also felt like it was a reminder of the beauty in embracing each moment with open hearts. Great job!
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Your words are so beautiful. I felt that it was a wish for a world where there is more kindness. It's a touching and inspiring call for God to be a part of our lives. I also felt like it was a reminder of the beauty in embracing each moment with open hearts. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Angela,
I love this awesome praise to God, penned in very unique fashion!
Your words are true; your sentiment of loving God shines through.
Great poem,
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Angela,
I love this awesome praise to God, penned in very unique fashion!
Your words are true; your sentiment of loving God shines through.
Great poem,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from pome lover
I love the poem and I love your slang - the words you use and phrases to express you feeling. My only suggestion is that it's a tad long. I think it would have more impact if there were less of it.
But that's just my opinion. I still think it's very good!
Katharine
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I love the poem and I love your slang - the words you use and phrases to express you feeling. My only suggestion is that it's a tad long. I think it would have more impact if there were less of it.
But that's just my opinion. I still think it's very good!
Katharine
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I was very touched by your wonderful free write, I felt the passion and the chaos in life and how it can flaw us and also fill us with euphoria. A magical post, much enjoyed Angela, love Dolly x
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I was very touched by your wonderful free write, I felt the passion and the chaos in life and how it can flaw us and also fill us with euphoria. A magical post, much enjoyed Angela, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
