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Elfin Queen Galadriel's Help

Queen Galadriel Aids in defense of Ashthorne Manor

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading. Reading this also caused me to pause and think about the ending. Yes, nobody ever wins a war, it just causes additional wars.  This is well written.


 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from amosajames
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Classic tale of the our favorite fantasy heroes , the elves and the medieval military battle. A swathe of characters id like to know more about, especially the elf queen and Mordor. I would like to know more about the owner of the owl. You have set quite a stage.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

Comment from Claire Tennant
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This is one riveting tale. The imagery is beautiful, and the dialogue is believable. Only one thing to watch."The 'Scotts' only needs one 'T' (Hint I am Scots-born).
I look forward to reading more chapters should you decide to extend the story.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024

Comment from royowen
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There's nothing better than help coming from possibly a unexpected source, Queen Galadriel, who was also the name of an Elfin Queen in Lord of the rings) they were a fearsome force in the book, and they are here, I wonder how they will fare second time around, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : They (own) me. Owe? 2: leaving the (Scotts) Scots?

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024