Autumn in New England
A Bragi poem for the pen to paper club11 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
cool autumn bragi (except for the football season lol)
love the 10 feet high snow
and the animals burrowing...
cool imagery and smooth flow and flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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cool autumn bragi (except for the football season lol)
love the 10 feet high snow
and the animals burrowing...
cool imagery and smooth flow and flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Snoozing beneath snow drifts doesn't sound like fun to me, but I did enjoy the description of your New England fall, June. The sweet apple cider and warm apple pie sounds delicious. I am presuming New England is an apple growing area. Nicely done with this bragi poem, June.
Cheers
Valda
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Snoozing beneath snow drifts doesn't sound like fun to me, but I did enjoy the description of your New England fall, June. The sweet apple cider and warm apple pie sounds delicious. I am presuming New England is an apple growing area. Nicely done with this bragi poem, June.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written poem for the club event, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best of days. And a very good week. Patricia.
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This is a very nicely written poem for the club event, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best of days. And a very good week. Patricia.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This Bragi poem, Autumn in New England, has the proper formatting and notes all of the signals that the world is turning down the pace and preparing for winters embrace.
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This Bragi poem, Autumn in New England, has the proper formatting and notes all of the signals that the world is turning down the pace and preparing for winters embrace.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Autumn will soon be dressed in its finest cloak of burnt oranges, yellows, and browns and it will be a spectacular sight to see. We will enjoy all the little things that come with the season, though in the back of our minds, we understand that fields of white will follow. WEll done! Enjoyed!
Smiles, Carol
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Autumn will soon be dressed in its finest cloak of burnt oranges, yellows, and browns and it will be a spectacular sight to see. We will enjoy all the little things that come with the season, though in the back of our minds, we understand that fields of white will follow. WEll done! Enjoyed!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
You did an excellent job in crafting this Bragi verse, June. I like the seasonal poem that romanticizes the shift from fall to winter. Well done, my friend.
Melissa
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You did an excellent job in crafting this Bragi verse, June. I like the seasonal poem that romanticizes the shift from fall to winter. Well done, my friend.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from royowen
You are so right, New England in the fall is certainly very beautiful, I was there in 2014, this is s beautifully written poem June, you expressive poem is treat read, well done, blessings Roy
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You are so right, New England in the fall is certainly very beautiful, I was there in 2014, this is s beautifully written poem June, you expressive poem is treat read, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from lyenochka
A New England autumn is definitely worthy of songs and poems. One of my favorite songs is Cheryl Wheeler's, "When Fall Comes to New England." Your poem reminds me of that.
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A New England autumn is definitely worthy of songs and poems. One of my favorite songs is Cheryl Wheeler's, "When Fall Comes to New England." Your poem reminds me of that.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful words tgat put my right there on the midist of the Autumn show. Very pleasant and to me nostalgic poem, with a format I do not think I have seen before.
Nice one.
RJ
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Beautiful words tgat put my right there on the midist of the Autumn show. Very pleasant and to me nostalgic poem, with a format I do not think I have seen before.
Nice one.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
The reader can feel, see, and smell the season's change in your Bragi poem. Your syllable counts are good, and the rhyme is interesting. There's lots of activity going on here, as preparations are made for winter. Nicely done! Carol
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The reader can feel, see, and smell the season's change in your Bragi poem. Your syllable counts are good, and the rhyme is interesting. There's lots of activity going on here, as preparations are made for winter. Nicely done! Carol
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2024