Imam bayildi
Collapse of stout person.3 total reviews
Comment from F. William Lester
I was a bit confused about the meaning of your poem until I read the explanation at the end. Thank you. I believe he fainted when he saw the bill. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Stay well.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
I was a bit confused about the meaning of your poem until I read the explanation at the end. Thank you. I believe he fainted when he saw the bill. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Stay well.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you.
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My pleasure.
Comment from papa55mike
Oh, you had me at eggplants and olive oil. I love all veggies with a touch of oil, seasoned a little, and then throw them on the smoker. I'm hungry! What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
Oh, you had me at eggplants and olive oil. I love all veggies with a touch of oil, seasoned a little, and then throw them on the smoker. I'm hungry! What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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So good, Mike. Many thanks.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! The fainting high priest was not expected! It makes the poem both so funny. It's such clever and funny poem withi wonderful word choices. Great job.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
Nicely done! The fainting high priest was not expected! It makes the poem both so funny. It's such clever and funny poem withi wonderful word choices. Great job.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Many thanks, Michael.