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Imam bayildi

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Comment from F. William Lester
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I was a bit confused about the meaning of your poem until I read the explanation at the end. Thank you. I believe he fainted when he saw the bill. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Stay well.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
    Thank you.
reply by F. William Lester on 11-Sep-2024
    My pleasure.
Comment from papa55mike
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Oh, you had me at eggplants and olive oil. I love all veggies with a touch of oil, seasoned a little, and then throw them on the smoker. I'm hungry! What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    So good, Mike. Many thanks.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Nicely done! The fainting high priest was not expected! It makes the poem both so funny. It's such clever and funny poem withi wonderful word choices. Great job.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Many thanks, Michael.