Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Aiona,
This is the betrayal that gave us forgiveness and eternal life as a result.
Nicely done poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
By the way I have just published a book that is now available on Amazon titled "The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry) by Joan Pechter.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024

Thank you for your review, Joan. I love that you know the story behind the poem. I looked you up on Amazon. You published your collection a month before I published mine!

reply by dragonpoet on 17-Sep-2024

You're welcome, Aiona. Congrats. What is your collection called?
Joan

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024

Hi, Joan. It's called "Zucchini in Your Back Seat." :)

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Regardless of who we are, Christ died on the cross to forgive all our sins. Your words fit the style and leave us we food for thought as well.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Thank you for your review, Carol. Any suggestions for improvement?

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written betrayal, and I wish you the best in the contest. May you have a pleasant day. This particular format work very well with your words and I enjoyed listening to it. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Thank you for your review, Patricia. Any suggestions for improvement?