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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Regular People and Others"Two very real women in not so real situation.
20 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Alright, young lady, brilliant work. I love how you handled Ezra, it was a necessary evil. I am good as the day is long, but I will not be made to feel inferior by anyone. My father always said that I was the only person who could tell you to f-off and you're happy to do it, lol.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Alright, young lady, brilliant work. I love how you handled Ezra, it was a necessary evil. I am good as the day is long, but I will not be made to feel inferior by anyone. My father always said that I was the only person who could tell you to f-off and you're happy to do it, lol.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Lol. Charisma that's what your dad was referring to. Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen
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Good word, lol. My pleasure, Gretchen.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Normally the "all is not well" would have me worried about what is to come but in the case of you two, I cannot wait! It probably just means more mindless mayhem at a new location so bring it on!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Normally the "all is not well" would have me worried about what is to come but in the case of you two, I cannot wait! It probably just means more mindless mayhem at a new location so bring it on!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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You just may be right. We are toying with an idea to keep this going. This has been a fun project. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
I'm glad you felt strong enough about the subject of Rebekah to confront Ezra. The argument you presented was well thought out, even if it was a spur of the moment thing. I'm curious as to why two cars have shown up instead of just the one. I don't like the way the unexpected usually turns out. I guess I'll just have to wait and see how this shakes out. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hello Gretchen,
I'm glad you felt strong enough about the subject of Rebekah to confront Ezra. The argument you presented was well thought out, even if it was a spur of the moment thing. I'm curious as to why two cars have shown up instead of just the one. I don't like the way the unexpected usually turns out. I guess I'll just have to wait and see how this shakes out. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Rachelle and I are toying with a follow-up story. This new person might be involved. Thank you forthis encouraging review and rating. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I wonder if I'm one of those idiots you don't engage with.... lol probably.
I love this chapter, so much has happened! What are the bad news.... I wonder.
I don't like Ezra but I understand his pov.
I can't wait for the next chapter.... so much to deal with.
You live near the ocean? How lucky.
Well done
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I wonder if I'm one of those idiots you don't engage with.... lol probably.
I love this chapter, so much has happened! What are the bad news.... I wonder.
I don't like Ezra but I understand his pov.
I can't wait for the next chapter.... so much to deal with.
You live near the ocean? How lucky.
Well done
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I can promise you you are not on that list. Lol. It's usually someone who tries to waste my time with politics. Thank you so much. Gretchen
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Good to know. I try to stay out of politics on fanstory
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Terrible thought that all is not well! You two really need to get out of there before someone is really upset. Has the teenager shown signs of wanting to leave with you? I think I missed that.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Terrible thought that all is not well! You two really need to get out of there before someone is really upset. Has the teenager shown signs of wanting to leave with you? I think I missed that.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Rachelle had mentioned it to her. This mystery person is going to gunk things up, I believe. Gretchen
Comment from Samantha Wymer
I love how authors come together and create such an amazing book. Great minds do think alike. What a creative storyline. Rachelle is something else for sure. Great writing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I love how authors come together and create such an amazing book. Great minds do think alike. What a creative storyline. Rachelle is something else for sure. Great writing.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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That she is!! Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the extra star. Very appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoy knowing what you saw, heard, said, and think. You describe feelings that the reader can identify with. Now that it looks like you may be back on the road, your gut is telling you something, and I believe in gut feelings. I look forward to your reflections on your next adventure.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I enjoy knowing what you saw, heard, said, and think. You describe feelings that the reader can identify with. Now that it looks like you may be back on the road, your gut is telling you something, and I believe in gut feelings. I look forward to your reflections on your next adventure.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much. This has been a blast to write. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
This is an important message - we can agree to disagree. We can still respect others even if they have different opinions (especially politically ! ) from us. But we can acknowledge that they are made in God's image and is loved by God so if Ezra believes his Bible, he should also be humbled by the little speech. I wonder if that's enough to give him peace about Rebekah leaving.
"Oy vay, Rachelle you look mashugana." (Oy vey) if you mean the adjective then the mashuga techinically should be mashuga'at but no one would really focus on that.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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This is an important message - we can agree to disagree. We can still respect others even if they have different opinions (especially politically ! ) from us. But we can acknowledge that they are made in God's image and is loved by God so if Ezra believes his Bible, he should also be humbled by the little speech. I wonder if that's enough to give him peace about Rebekah leaving.
"Oy vay, Rachelle you look mashugana." (Oy vey) if you mean the adjective then the mashuga techinically should be mashuga'at but no one would really focus on that.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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That word is the extent of my Hebrew. Lol. Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
I must admit that life in an Amish community would be an enormous challenge for me, or for anyone for that matter, our adventures some years ago in Lancaster county was very interesting and the Amish probably make a good buck out of their business ventures, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I must admit that life in an Amish community would be an enormous challenge for me, or for anyone for that matter, our adventures some years ago in Lancaster county was very interesting and the Amish probably make a good buck out of their business ventures, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I doubt I could last much longer than a day. Gretchen
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Me? A day and a half
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this with us. I can't wait to see who this other person in the car is. I don't feel especially good about it myself. This is another really good write.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this with us. I can't wait to see who this other person in the car is. I don't feel especially good about it myself. This is another really good write.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for this. The person in the car could be bad news. We'll see. Gretchen