Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well done. I appreciate the raw honesty in your song. And and the way you use "shit beer" to show the neglect works so well. I have to say this is such a relatable song about moving on. I think a lot of people will appreciate it. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
Thank you so much! My first attempt at a song.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun rhyming poem and I have a friend whose husband loves his beer and he insists on drinking every night and so far he has remarkably survived until his 70s. His wife has stuck by him, but it hasn't been a bed of roses, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024