Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

the call of the sea as the wind blows across the sand is one of the greatest moments for me. I remember collecting shells when I was young and putting one of the big ones to my ear so we could hear the roar of the waves. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Yes, we all need to listen to the distant voices telling us about love and passion. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

Ah, a good old fashioned tanka. But a goodie, 31 syllables exactly, and a great theme, welll worded, and something everyone relates, but perhaps can't wrote, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Shells have the sound of the sea inside them and I remember putting the shells to my ear as a kid to listen to the sea, a magical poem for the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is such a creative and enjoyable read. I love the imagery in your poem. I can see the shells and golden sands. It's a beautiful poem that invites us to pause and listen to the whispers of nature. Great job.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

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