Comment from
Bill Schott
This tanka, Eager to Start Over, has the proper formatting and brings the past ahead to be attached to the present without the time in between. .......
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from
patcelaw
This is a very nice 57577 poem and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a blessed day and may God give you the right words to speak. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
Thank you for your review and kind words.