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preparation is key

service announcement to high schoolers

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, you now have two vote!

If someone wants to be prepared, one must acquire knowledge.( study)

If you are taking a SATs or a STDs test knowing the subject(s) is important in both cases.

I remember when Rock Hudson "came out "
in 1985, that's the first time I had heard about AIDS

It had already been spreading in the gay community quite awhile but he made it public domain.

I had no idea he was a homosexual.

Freddie Mercury died of AIDS in 1991. I cried my heart out.

I like the word play.

I know there is some concoction now that helps people with AIDS live longer but there is no cure.

Governments should be investing money in teaching kids about this horrible disease.. it's still out there but they act as if it's not.





 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    I even heard Rock Hudson mentioned in a song recently, sung my a heterosexual woman. Guess he was getting his rocks off in unexpected places.

    I think I read a few years ago that there is actually a full-on cure for AIDS now, but it might not work on everyone. Or maybe some people are just immune to it somehow. I'll have to look it up now. 🦍
Comment from Bill Schott
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This tanka, Preparation is Key, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that both of these items require protection. One is found in study books, the other at the pharmacy.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Or one could slaughter a pig or goat and use their intestines, but that's going REAL old-school. Thanks Bill! 🦍
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This poem is clever and fun! . It's witty and punchy - definitely made me smile! The surprise twist at the end is a great touch, Keep up the creative work.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024