Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this fun contest entry with us. When I was in school, during music class, one of the dances we learned was square dancing. It was fun, but I haven't done any since. My loss. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Same! I remember square-dancing only in fourth grade P.E. It was so fun. It was like a puzzle, with your body! Thank you for your review, Barbara. Any suggestions for improvement?

reply by barbara.wilkey on 12-Sep-2024

I write prose, not poetry. I just enjoy reading it.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Your poem takes me back a number of decades when I was very young and I used to like to square dance. Square dancing was quite the dance in my day. Patricia.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024

Thank you for your review, Patricia. Yeah, I loved square dancing in P.E. class. My classmates, not so much. But I loved it! It's like a puzzle. But one you solve with your whole body, and with other people! Like Twister, but in motion! Any suggestions for improvement?

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was so creative. The playful word choices and upbeat tone bring a sense of joy and movement. I think you've captured the spirit of a dance floor. The way you describe step to step works so well - making it easy to imagine the dance unfolding. Great job!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024

Thank you for your review, Michael Ludwinder. Any suggestions for improvement?