Around the Bend
A loop poem28 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
And I love the way you closed your Loop poem, from around the bend being so far away to taking that step around the bend to new beginnings. Beautifully used alliteration and a lovely read. Congratulations on the contest win.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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And I love the way you closed your Loop poem, from around the bend being so far away to taking that step around the bend to new beginnings. Beautifully used alliteration and a lovely read. Congratulations on the contest win.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Valda, thank you so much! Xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations on your worthy win Jessica and this is a magical loop poem. This form is challenging and your poem is a joy to read, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on your worthy win Jessica and this is a magical loop poem. This form is challenging and your poem is a joy to read, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Dolly! Xoxo
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so beautiful. For me I found your message to bea bout finding hope when we have had a loss. I was touched by your poem. And some of your lines really stood out including "empty arms" and "the morning sun to pour". Wonderfully written.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Your poem is so beautiful. For me I found your message to bea bout finding hope when we have had a loss. I was touched by your poem. And some of your lines really stood out including "empty arms" and "the morning sun to pour". Wonderfully written.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your insightful feedback! Xo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This is a well written loop poem that tells of the whole grief over a break-up or death of a loved one puts in your soul and the work it takes to get through it.
Did you mean to put 'more' on its own line in the third stanza?
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay heathy
Have a terrific day.
Joan
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Hi Jessica,
This is a well written loop poem that tells of the whole grief over a break-up or death of a loved one puts in your soul and the work it takes to get through it.
Did you mean to put 'more' on its own line in the third stanza?
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay heathy
Have a terrific day.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from Terry Reilly
Congratulations! A beautiful poem in its own right. The loops seem to be effortlessly accomplished and flow naturally throughout. A very difficult task to achieve.
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Congratulations! A beautiful poem in its own right. The loops seem to be effortlessly accomplished and flow naturally throughout. A very difficult task to achieve.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from Contests
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Jessica. I enjoyed reading this lovely verse and your theme and message really resonated with me. The beauty of these thougths flow effortlessly from line to line. Just beautiful. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Hello Jessica. I enjoyed reading this lovely verse and your theme and message really resonated with me. The beauty of these thougths flow effortlessly from line to line. Just beautiful. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Melissa, thank you so much for your wonderful comment!
Comment from karenina
Wow. It takes real talent to weave these loop poems just right ~ so they do not feel stilted or forced. You're coming off the Poem of the Month Win (congratulations again!)--with what, in my opinion, may well be another contender. I especially like that you closed the loop fully, with the last word being the first.
Great job, Jessica!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Wow. It takes real talent to weave these loop poems just right ~ so they do not feel stilted or forced. You're coming off the Poem of the Month Win (congratulations again!)--with what, in my opinion, may well be another contender. I especially like that you closed the loop fully, with the last word being the first.
Great job, Jessica!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Karenina, I'm honored- thank you for your kindness, as always. I appreciate you and your encouraging words! Xoxo
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Count me as a HUGE fan!
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Comment from Colorado Owl
This is beautifully done, Jessica. It is so difficult to find "light in loss", but so necessary. I particularly like hope persists in every stanza, in spite of the pain that you describe so well. Thank you!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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This is beautifully done, Jessica. It is so difficult to find "light in loss", but so necessary. I particularly like hope persists in every stanza, in spite of the pain that you describe so well. Thank you!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I truly appreciate that! Xoxo
Comment from Harry Craft
Wow! Great Loop Poem! I really enjoyed reading this. I have just discovered this type of poetry and I really like it. I have not written any, but I might give it a try. This one is really good. How can one go wrong writing about love, something most of us do not have enough of in life today. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Wow! Great Loop Poem! I really enjoyed reading this. I have just discovered this type of poetry and I really like it. I have not written any, but I might give it a try. This one is really good. How can one go wrong writing about love, something most of us do not have enough of in life today. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Harry, thank you for your kind words! Xo
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You are so welcome Jessica!
