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Comment from Katiemae1977
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I really liked this Gypsy. Political views aside the beginning is beautiful and what you have to say about there being a thin veil between things. That was very disrespectful of him I think.
Take care and enjoy your weekend!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, katiemae, I appreciate your kind words and helpful feedback.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I think this was in bad taste that Trump did this. However, I am uncertain if permission is required to take such a photo, permission or not, it was is the right thing to have asked before doing so.
RJ

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    It is against protocol. There was a cemetery guard that Trump security agents pushed her out of the way.


    Family and friends are welcome to visit their dead but Trump was using it as a political photo op very disrespectful. He is an awful man and expresident. It's hard to explain if you are not here. Trump is constantly on the news spreading lies... it's exhausting.

    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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"I must you go off to war" - missing word? i must let you?

yea, he's despicable! those veterans fought for us... and he's just walking all over them! uhg!

anyway, a great poem with excellent imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)



 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, it was a sickening thing to do because he knows he's disrespected our military personnel before, especially disabled vets. And now he's trying to show he likes being photographed there. It's hard to understand why he still has supporters.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    I know, it's unbelievable. His supporters will vote for him no mater what.

    Thank you very much, big sister. It's nice to hear from someone who understands. I had to explain Trump to a foreigner.... it's hard.

    Love

    Marival 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Politics are a disgusting game. They don't care about any of us. We are zeros in their eyes. Politicians are master magicians. And we clap and act amazed at their slight of hand. This was a sad poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen. I hear what you mean but Trump is at a complete other level.

    Gypsy 😊