Comment from
jessizero
This was a great and inspiring haiku for the contest. You got the syllable counts right, and your message was wonderful. I wish you had included a picture, but it's fine without it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from
RodG
Your short poem succeeds both literally and figuratively. It's easy for this reader to visualize the purple flowers growing between the slats. But they also symbolize a strong, perseverant person undeterred by the hardships faced in life.
Rod
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024