Comment from
jessizero
I enjoyed this ABC poem for the contest. I enjoyed your rhymes and the line with which you chose to end this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I love the message of your poem. And love the word choices! "Fishing for souls" and "graces are gold" gives this almost a spiritual quality. The closing line, "Bliss zen happy!" - haha - perfect!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
Tnanks for positive review.