Comment from F. William Lester

Excellent

I enjoyed the simple format. Your poem is succinct, but thoughtful and possesses a subtle passion. Well done and thanks for sharing it. Good luck in the contest and stay well.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

---

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

Thank you for kind review.

reply by F. William Lester on 13-Sep-2024

My pleasure. Have a wonderful day.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I enjoyed the rhymes you used in this passionate love poem. I liked that your poem wasn't explicit. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

---

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

Thanks for positive feedback.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Well, I'm gray all over, and if anybody needs liberation people with gray hair should be first in line. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024

---

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

Thanks for kind review.