Comment from
F. William Lester
Well done. I found the structure intriguing, something I've never seen. Your detailed explanation at the end was very enlightening. Thanks for sharing it and good luck. Stay well.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem. It makes you think. For me your poem seems to share the painful nature of true love. The imagery of flowers and scars for me shows that fleeting beauty. Sometimes there the reality of love is painful. Great job! Wonderfully written!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from
papa55mike
Yes, we never know what we have until it's gone. It's difficult to fill that hole again. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
Thank you very much for your kind words.