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When stripped of your role as mother5 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! I liked your poem and its rhymes. I think it's great that you found who to be. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! I liked your poem and its rhymes. I think it's great that you found who to be. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from papa55mike
Sometimes it's tough to grasp the responsibility people unwillingly place on us. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Sometimes it's tough to grasp the responsibility people unwillingly place on us. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
Comment from Mufasa
Powerful and moving. As strong as the bond is between myself and my daughters, I understand that it is different being a mother. I hope you and your family are well now.
Regards,
M
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Powerful and moving. As strong as the bond is between myself and my daughters, I understand that it is different being a mother. I hope you and your family are well now.
Regards,
M
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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You know actually I thought this poem would have very little relevance. How often are a women's kids sneaked off to another country whilst their mother was in treatment for life threatening anorexia? But actually dad's can get a raw deal when it comes to custody, empty next syndrome is quite painful, there are sadly lots of occasions when a parent misses their kids life. Thank you so much for re viewing and your kid words. You learn to live with the pain .
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was so creative. Congrats on yoru first post! I love the imagery in your poem. From building "great dens" and the comparison to achievements like the Sistine Chapel. My favorite was the final lines. For me there is a sense of searching for purpose and understanding in the face of everything changing.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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I thought this was so creative. Congrats on yoru first post! I love the imagery in your poem. From building "great dens" and the comparison to achievements like the Sistine Chapel. My favorite was the final lines. For me there is a sense of searching for purpose and understanding in the face of everything changing.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you first of all for your diplomatic correction of my spelling error. But also the last two lines I was worried most about that they could be misconstrued as aggressive but you understood what I meant almost better than I did! Thank you so much, you've given me great confidence that even a topic that not many can relate to is nonetheless worthwhile
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Thank you first of all for your diplomatic correction of my spelling error. But also the last two lines I was worried most about that they could be misconstrued as aggressive but you understood what I meant almost better than I did! Thank you so much, you've given me great confidence that even a topic that not many can relate to is nonetheless worthwhile
Comment from Shanbreen
This poem tells more than what it reads. Whatever happens, you will always be a mother to your little people who are now no more little.
This poem is very good as your first post. It flows well. Thanks for sharing.
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This poem tells more than what it reads. Whatever happens, you will always be a mother to your little people who are now no more little.
This poem is very good as your first post. It flows well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
