Loop dee Loop
A journey from Hell to . . .4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lobber,
This is poem shows the horror of bad memories of death in an old house. It seems the grief of one who has lost a loved one. I am sorry for your loss of your sister.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
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Hi Lobber,
This is poem shows the horror of bad memories of death in an old house. It seems the grief of one who has lost a loved one. I am sorry for your loss of your sister.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm guessing this contest entry is getting ready for Halloween. I've noticed all the poets enjoy joining in with Halloween themes. I enjoyed reading this contest entry and want to wish you luck with the contest.
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I'm guessing this contest entry is getting ready for Halloween. I've noticed all the poets enjoy joining in with Halloween themes. I enjoyed reading this contest entry and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was a great loop poem, though it was disturbing. I enjoyed your rhymes, as well as your loops. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
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This was a great loop poem, though it was disturbing. I enjoyed your rhymes, as well as your loops. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Jer... ewww, your wonderfully written Loop is gruesome and definitely stands out and captures your readers' attention. Great job on the descriptions and the flow from line to line. Good luck!
Melissa
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Hello Jer... ewww, your wonderfully written Loop is gruesome and definitely stands out and captures your readers' attention. Great job on the descriptions and the flow from line to line. Good luck!
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024