2024 Japanese Poetry
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8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This kanshi poem, Dad's Christmas Present, has the proper formatting and takes the latest school shooting from the headlines and shows us how stupid people can be.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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This kanshi poem, Dad's Christmas Present, has the proper formatting and takes the latest school shooting from the headlines and shows us how stupid people can be.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I understand that the father, who gave this child the gun has also been brought up on charges. I also understand that people were aware that this child has violent tendencies. Children should not have access to gun.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I understand that the father, who gave this child the gun has also been brought up on charges. I also understand that people were aware that this child has violent tendencies. Children should not have access to gun.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Yes, the parents are charged with 2 murders, so far, and the kid was posting disturbing posts online. It's so sad for the victims and their families and friends, it's a tragedy.
Thank you very much, Barbara. Happy weekend end.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
This was a very sad and tragic day in our nation. Unfortunately, we have had too many of these days caused by the senseless shootings by individuals with automatic guns who loose them on our children. Gun reform is desperately need in this country. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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This was a very sad and tragic day in our nation. Unfortunately, we have had too many of these days caused by the senseless shootings by individuals with automatic guns who loose them on our children. Gun reform is desperately need in this country. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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You are right. Thank you very much, RJ. Happy weekend end.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Neonewman
This is a traumatic piece, relatable by many in this day and age. I'm not sure why anyone would buy such a weapon for a child. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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This is a traumatic piece, relatable by many in this day and age. I'm not sure why anyone would buy such a weapon for a child. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
It's just crazy that the father actually bought his son a gun when the FBI was there just months before warning him about the violent messages that the kid was putting online. This makes me so mad! Sigh. This absolutely has to stop!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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It's just crazy that the father actually bought his son a gun when the FBI was there just months before warning him about the violent messages that the kid was putting online. This makes me so mad! Sigh. This absolutely has to stop!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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The parents gave beel charged for two of the four murders. It's so sad and scary. I worry about Atticus.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Pretty disturbing on every level you presented, including the (deliberately) horrendous picture. Life definitely did not improve with the invention of the gun. I, like you, do not have anything against responsible gun owners or their right to bear arms, but in the hands of the wrong people - though I guess that's the case with anything, right? fire, knives, rocks, arrows - they become tragedies waiting to happen.
Sad and evocative, Gypsy, but very well done. It was a solid, cogent presentation, not a "rant." I respect that very much. xoxo
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Pretty disturbing on every level you presented, including the (deliberately) horrendous picture. Life definitely did not improve with the invention of the gun. I, like you, do not have anything against responsible gun owners or their right to bear arms, but in the hands of the wrong people - though I guess that's the case with anything, right? fire, knives, rocks, arrows - they become tragedies waiting to happen.
Sad and evocative, Gypsy, but very well done. It was a solid, cogent presentation, not a "rant." I respect that very much. xoxo
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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You're very welcome, Miss Talent. xoxo
Comment from shelley kaye
we just need stricter gun laws - no one under 21 allowed to even have one - or access to one for starters!
anyway, a great powerful kanshi poem
good imagery and descriptions and smooth flow
thank you fort sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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we just need stricter gun laws - no one under 21 allowed to even have one - or access to one for starters!
anyway, a great powerful kanshi poem
good imagery and descriptions and smooth flow
thank you fort sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
It is such a sad thing that people are not educating their children about the danger of guns. And are allowing guns to be available to those children so that they can use them to other children. When I was in high school, which was over 60 years ago, every boy in the high school had a gun in the back of their pick up and they never once thought about using it on fellow students.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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It is such a sad thing that people are not educating their children about the danger of guns. And are allowing guns to be available to those children so that they can use them to other children. When I was in high school, which was over 60 years ago, every boy in the high school had a gun in the back of their pick up and they never once thought about using it on fellow students.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊