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Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Caught in the Act"
Miranda finds herself in another situation.

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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peanut butter and jelly sandwich and diet cola sounds horrable... lol

I love the ordeal with the old shoplifters. The ending is funny.

Well done

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much. Miranda was definitely having a good time. Gretchen
Comment from Samantha Wymer
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I'm so glad that your book is getting the recognition it deserves. I seen the ribbon at the bottom of the chapter. Miranda can't seem to to caught a lucky break with all the challenges she faces. I can't wait to see what happens next.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much. I'm very happy that you are enjoying this story. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
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You never know what you might here out of the mouths of people, but it seems they have fine tunes their lies and excuses to a science. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    That's very true. People lie about the dumbest things. Lol. Thank you fir this. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
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ha ha ha ..That was very interesting. Two elderly ladies upto some stealing business. Is this really happened in your working life? I enjoyed reading it .Now I have to wait to know what the other lady did..

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    The other lady was the decoy. Luring Rita out. They didn't know Miranda was in there. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Jim Wile
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Way to go, Miranda! And still people lie even when caught in the act. Have they no shame? I love the way Miranda toyed with her first and got her to incriminate herself. I love it when cheats get caught.

I can't wait for her to "lock horns" with Mr. Tomlin again!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    I can't wait for her encounter with Mr. Tomlin. Thank you, Jim, for this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I couldn't help but laugh as I read this story. Who knew little old ladies would steal wine. I honestly never thought about it, but hey why not. Thank you for sharing this post with us. It's a good write.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    We've caught older people stealing hemorrhoid medicine, candy and other things. Thank you, Barbara. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
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This was fun to read. Miranda really knows how to handle anybody it seems. She is a good mother to Waylon and no she wishes she could handle that teacher. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    She is pretty direct with people, but that doesn't always work in her favor. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Goodness me! Stuffing wine bottles down her shirt? LOL! It's good that Miranda was in the office having her lunch at the right time. Who would suspect two elderly ladies? Lol. This was a nice in-between chapter showing life as it is in normal (sort of) life. I'm sure she will let them off with a stiff warning. I enjoyed reading it. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Shes going to have fun with this. Didn't want story line to get too dark or serious. Thank you so much for this incredible review. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Gretchen,
I wish I had a six for this. Smuggles? What an appropriate name. I wonder what she might have done if you'd picked up a baseball bat or some such thing and threatened to smack her boobs with it? This was a great chapter gal, just what I've come to expect from you. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    That honestly may happen unless the lady confesses to her crime. Lol. Thanks so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
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This was a great story and I am guessing this is true, as well. Thanks for sharing. I hope the old girl pays for the broken bottle. Keep these great tales coming.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    I'm sure things have happened like this. I've seen shoplifting videos so I know they can get creative. Thank you for this awesome review and stellar rating. Gretchen