Survival
The cycle of life.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done. I think with just two stanzas you share a story. I like how you share the horror of the raptor grabbing a cub but also how it's a positive for the bird's nest. This is very creative because you feel horror and all of the sudden you realize - this is how things work! Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Nicely done. I think with just two stanzas you share a story. I like how you share the horror of the raptor grabbing a cub but also how it's a positive for the bird's nest. This is very creative because you feel horror and all of the sudden you realize - this is how things work! Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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We humans kill for sport and that's cruel..and a waste of life.
Wildlife kills to eat, giving each death meaning/ suppose.
I appreciate the time you took to post and share your thoughts with me.
Comment from Sarah Probe 1
a very violent but realistic approach of a jungle kind of savage life, when God's kingdom has come there's a prophecy in the Bible that says, that animals and humans won't have those cruel instincts any longer....
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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a very violent but realistic approach of a jungle kind of savage life, when God's kingdom has come there's a prophecy in the Bible that says, that animals and humans won't have those cruel instincts any longer....
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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It's a lovely thought ..that one day we will all live in peace including predators like big cats, raptors etc.
I'm tired of reading about war, suffering, destruction, and death.
Thank you for the encouraging score/extra shiny star!
Keep safe!
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Many thanks for your kind words, and i hope you win the contest, take care,
Sarah
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Ciao!
The contest ended a couple of days ago.
My entry got one vote.
I still enjoyed writing it.
I'll have more luck in the next contest.
Keep safe!