You Grow Heroic
Dedicated to all those who protect us...8 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well done on your contest placing, Patrick! This free verse is elegantly expressed in praise of the emergency services. I don't know if you've ever had the experience of being in need of these titans but your emotion behind the words is palpable. Thank you for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Well done on your contest placing, Patrick! This free verse is elegantly expressed in praise of the emergency services. I don't know if you've ever had the experience of being in need of these titans but your emotion behind the words is palpable. Thank you for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hi Debbie! I have no idea why I didn't answer this one when I did the other two! They came in about the same time! Oh well, gives us another chance to have a cuppa! You know, I lived in Aussie for seven years, so I know what that is. 99% of Americans hear that, and they would be like, what? 😂 Again, I appreciate you stopping by! I have you on my list for some reviews coming up very soon!
Comment from karenina
As an RN of thirty-five years I thank you for this...
I join you in thanking each of the other professions/callings as well.
There have been microseconds when I knew someone's life was in my hands.
At that "now" instant I saw the trusting eyes searing my soul and strengthening my resolve.
It's been an honor!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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As an RN of thirty-five years I thank you for this...
I join you in thanking each of the other professions/callings as well.
There have been microseconds when I knew someone's life was in my hands.
At that "now" instant I saw the trusting eyes searing my soul and strengthening my resolve.
It's been an honor!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, dear! I so much love how you take the time to review all my writing! In fact, you Port Raid is up next. I think I will do four this time, just for you and your devotion. 💕
Patrick
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You are such a fine writer, Patrick.
Your reviews are as thoughtful as your posts!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Patrick
This is a well done free verse out that gives thanks where is is due. I do agree that first responders and our military can never be thanked enough for what they do for us.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hi Patrick
This is a well done free verse out that gives thanks where is is due. I do agree that first responders and our military can never be thanked enough for what they do for us.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Joan! I appreciate you taking the time to comment. 😊
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Don't mention it, Patrick.
Joan
Comment from Nicki.B
What a wonderful poem in tribute to all of the amazing emergency service personnel who go above and beyond each and every day. Hero's that we cannot thank enough for their duties. Beautiful words chosen to capture your appreciation.
Well done and best of luck
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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What a wonderful poem in tribute to all of the amazing emergency service personnel who go above and beyond each and every day. Hero's that we cannot thank enough for their duties. Beautiful words chosen to capture your appreciation.
Well done and best of luck
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Nicki! I will visit your work over the next couple days to repay your kindness! Nice to meet you!
Patrick
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You're very welcome Patrick, thanks! Nice to meet you too.
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo! What an outstanding tribute to those who put their lives on the line for each of us and never question it. We need to stand tall and even if we can't run the front lines, we should be there to support them at all times.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Bravo! What an outstanding tribute to those who put their lives on the line for each of us and never question it. We need to stand tall and even if we can't run the front lines, we should be there to support them at all times.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Yeah, I agree. There are too many times that all of us forget about how we might live (or not) without all the everyday heroes.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem beautifully shares heroism. The imagery is powerful. What stood out to me was the titan standing firm amid sorrow. That is so powerful. You do a wonderful job of sharing the extraordinary nature of those who rise to the occasion when needed most.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I thought your poem beautifully shares heroism. The imagery is powerful. What stood out to me was the titan standing firm amid sorrow. That is so powerful. You do a wonderful job of sharing the extraordinary nature of those who rise to the occasion when needed most.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Michael! I appreciate you taking the time to read it, and I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I need to plant a few more 6 trees if you're going to keep this up. What an incredible voice you bring to this site. These heroes aren't celebrated enough for their contributions to our country.. thankvyou for doing it beautifully. Keep em coming.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I need to plant a few more 6 trees if you're going to keep this up. What an incredible voice you bring to this site. These heroes aren't celebrated enough for their contributions to our country.. thankvyou for doing it beautifully. Keep em coming.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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You're awesome, Marilyn! Thank you so much!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
It all comes down to your last two lines: How many of us will witness tomorrow because you grow heroic in times of trouble?
I was reminded of the firemen of 9/11, the law enforcement who enter mass shooting situations, the doctors and nurses of Covid times . . . Because of them we live on.
It makes me so happy when these heroes are given their due, before they "shrink back and blend anew".
Well done, Patrick. I enjoyed your free verse and wish you luck in the contest.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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It all comes down to your last two lines: How many of us will witness tomorrow because you grow heroic in times of trouble?
I was reminded of the firemen of 9/11, the law enforcement who enter mass shooting situations, the doctors and nurses of Covid times . . . Because of them we live on.
It makes me so happy when these heroes are given their due, before they "shrink back and blend anew".
Well done, Patrick. I enjoyed your free verse and wish you luck in the contest.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Pam!