2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Neonewman
I feel I've seen this artwork before. Not on here, in the everyday world. My Aunt may have had this print. Sounds of loneliness. Some of us crave some alone time. Well-Done, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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I feel I've seen this artwork before. Not on here, in the everyday world. My Aunt may have had this print. Sounds of loneliness. Some of us crave some alone time. Well-Done, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Steve, you gave me 4 stars, what can I improve?
Thank you,
Gypsy 😊
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Nothing! That was not on purpose, how can I fix it? I went back and changed it, hopefully it worked. I'm sorry, I've never read anything you've written that was less than six's and five's.
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No worries, it happens to many of us. Thank you for changing the review rating, it worked.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Singular sounds of alliteration inject sadness and loneliness into this haiku.There is a sense of haunting disconnection in this well-presented post.Thanks for sharing. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Singular sounds of alliteration inject sadness and loneliness into this haiku.There is a sense of haunting disconnection in this well-presented post.Thanks for sharing. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm sure that poor monk has to be lonely. Thank you for sharing this lonely poem with us. I could feel it as I read and studied the presentation too. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I'm sure that poor monk has to be lonely. Thank you for sharing this lonely poem with us. I could feel it as I read and studied the presentation too. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I think both the monk and the heron share a similar feeling of loneliness, and that the monk can empathize with the lonely heron. I think that him not being visible in the picture adds to the degree of his own loneliness.
Cleverly done.
Raj
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I think both the monk and the heron share a similar feeling of loneliness, and that the monk can empathize with the lonely heron. I think that him not being visible in the picture adds to the degree of his own loneliness.
Cleverly done.
Raj
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. You are completely right.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
aw a sad little haiku. . . but in a way, hopeful, too...
nice contrast between the monk and the heron with great imagery
smooth flow though-out
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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aw a sad little haiku. . . but in a way, hopeful, too...
nice contrast between the monk and the heron with great imagery
smooth flow though-out
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
I especially like your last two lines, but am not enamored with your first. I cannot envision a "sick and weary monk." Consider the imagery of possibly a hermit or an older infirmed person as an alternative concept.
Mark
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
I especially like your last two lines, but am not enamored with your first. I cannot envision a "sick and weary monk." Consider the imagery of possibly a hermit or an older infirmed person as an alternative concept.
Mark
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Herons are real loners. I'm always surprised when I see more than one together. Sometimes, they have to get together otherwise, there wouldn't be any baby herons! Great presentation and lovely picture!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Herons are real loners. I'm always surprised when I see more than one together. Sometimes, they have to get together otherwise, there wouldn't be any baby herons! Great presentation and lovely picture!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Hehe. I would like to see baby herons. 😊
Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ marival ❤️
Comment from Rachelle Allen
It IS a lonely sound, indeed. That is the perfect description of it. I heard one just today when my dog, Li'l Swish, and I were at the dog park, which also has an attached woods with a creek that runs through it. They're ENORMOUS birds, aren't they? And rather mysterious. I think you've captured their essence here beautifully in so few syllables. Lovely presentation, as well. xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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It IS a lonely sound, indeed. That is the perfect description of it. I heard one just today when my dog, Li'l Swish, and I were at the dog park, which also has an attached woods with a creek that runs through it. They're ENORMOUS birds, aren't they? And rather mysterious. I think you've captured their essence here beautifully in so few syllables. Lovely presentation, as well. xoxo
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle. The dog park sounds better than people park. 😆
Gypsy
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A ZILLION times better...though, sadly, they do have to be their with their owners. (though usually, dog owners there are very nice.)
xoxo
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed your poem. I like how shared nature and gave it emotoins. The heron's call becomes a symbol of isolation. I thought you shared a poem that really is touching. After reading it I had to pause and I could picture this in my head. Great work!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed your poem. I like how shared nature and gave it emotoins. The heron's call becomes a symbol of isolation. I thought you shared a poem that really is touching. After reading it I had to pause and I could picture this in my head. Great work!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊