2024 Japanese Poetry
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16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This kanshi poem, Gazing at Crystal Stars, has the proper formatting and finds the lovers in the middle of all the ambiance which reinforces the feelings being shared at this time. Nice.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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This kanshi poem, Gazing at Crystal Stars, has the proper formatting and finds the lovers in the middle of all the ambiance which reinforces the feelings being shared at this time. Nice.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill.
Happy weekend end.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nicely written. I appreciate the explanation of the type of poetry you wrote. I will go back and try it later. Enjoy your weekend. Weather is cooling here. My electric went down already. Karen
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Nicely written. I appreciate the explanation of the type of poetry you wrote. I will go back and try it later. Enjoy your weekend. Weather is cooling here. My electric went down already. Karen
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much,
Happy weekend end.
Gypsy 😊
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Comment from Neonewman
I enjoy reading your work and all of the work of those who've joined this group. This is a magical, romantic piece filled with love and passion.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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I enjoy reading your work and all of the work of those who've joined this group. This is a magical, romantic piece filled with love and passion.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The chill and starkness of the scene in the first stanza evolves to the lighter and more joyful sound of the birds before the warmth and passion of the embrace. A lovely little story told here, succinctly and sensually. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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The chill and starkness of the scene in the first stanza evolves to the lighter and more joyful sound of the birds before the warmth and passion of the embrace. A lovely little story told here, succinctly and sensually. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I often hang my laundry outside and so far, I haven't smelled autumn on the clothes. I am wondering why. I'm sure I will pretty soon. Your poem reminded me of that. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I often hang my laundry outside and so far, I haven't smelled autumn on the clothes. I am wondering why. I'm sure I will pretty soon. Your poem reminded me of that. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Yes, I was thinking of autumn in general. We don't have it in Los Angeles yet. Today is 206 degrees!
Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
This style is relatively new to me, but I like how it captures the moods of the characters and even has a rhyme. Its presentation is very stunning and catches the eye. Thank you for posting.
RJ
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This style is relatively new to me, but I like how it captures the moods of the characters and even has a rhyme. Its presentation is very stunning and catches the eye. Thank you for posting.
RJ
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Kanshi can be written with rhyme or free verse. I always choose words that sound goodto me. The rhyme was unintentional but it worked out.
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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Your welcome
RJ
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Douglas Goff
Kanshi certainly looks like fun. I like that have the option to rhyme or not. That makes the authors efforts less forced.
Really liked the pictures. That bottom one is inspiring. The stanza about the doves caught my attention. Don't see a lot of them any more. Beautiful bird.
Blessings.
Douglas
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Kanshi certainly looks like fun. I like that have the option to rhyme or not. That makes the authors efforts less forced.
Really liked the pictures. That bottom one is inspiring. The stanza about the doves caught my attention. Don't see a lot of them any more. Beautiful bird.
Blessings.
Douglas
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Douglas
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved how you captured the autumn sky in this piece and I loved the image of the person gazing at the crystal skies. I could really picture it in my mind as I was reading. An excellent piece.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I loved how you captured the autumn sky in this piece and I loved the image of the person gazing at the crystal skies. I could really picture it in my mind as I was reading. An excellent piece.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Jacob
Gypsy 😊
Comment from BethShelby
This Kanshi poem paints a lovely word picture as well as the literal picture you have used to display it. Enjoying fall weather under the night sky and being in the arms of your love sounds like life couldn't be sweeter.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This Kanshi poem paints a lovely word picture as well as the literal picture you have used to display it. Enjoying fall weather under the night sky and being in the arms of your love sounds like life couldn't be sweeter.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Beth
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
OH yes, your expression of love's scribal rhetoric is unsurpassed. The various nuances and coloured expressions are without peer Gypsy. Beautifully written and expressed, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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OH yes, your expression of love's scribal rhetoric is unsurpassed. The various nuances and coloured expressions are without peer Gypsy. Beautifully written and expressed, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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