Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

HI,
This is a good and sad poem about the state or America and what is happening within our democratic system. I like how the font color goes from patriotic to neutral. Maybe a metaphor for being nonpartisan.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Good luck in the contest.
Have a nice day.
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

You read into that very accurately! Thanks Joan! 🦍

reply by dragonpoet on 14-Sep-2024

No problem, SS. I am glad I got your intended meaning.
By the way I would like to let you know the I just published a book titled The Interloper ( and other stories in prose and poetry) by Joan Pechter.

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

Neat! Have you considered making it available on Kindle as well? 🦍

reply by dragonpoet on 14-Sep-2024

It is available as a kindle book too. It will also show on the Amazon page with the paperback .

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

That's a sharp poem! haha I think you do a great job of sharing your dissatisfaction with the political system. Not many will argue with that. I love your humor as well. You do a great job of making us think about state of our political system. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

Thank you very much Michael. Might be time for me to host another political contest...
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Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I like what you've done with your first verse of this sedoka and the creativity of using the two political parties, cnning the Republic and the demo of democracy.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024

Thank you Pearl!
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