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Harris V Trump Sedoku

Sedoko re Harris and Trump

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Comment from karenina
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Sadly, this is about the tone of this political contest and I suspect we'll see it on display during the much-touted debate on 11/10...

Your count is correct and if only we could concentrate on facts and policies instead of school-yard name calling, maybe we could find a way forward!

Karenina




 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    i agree my two-sense worth - Trump has to come off as somewhat sane, and competent, and not show signs of obvious mental decline and avoid name-calling and insults. Kamala has to fact check him but avoid getting drawn into his games and she has to show that she is competent, and likeable. she is likely to win the debate but she has to be careful not to spend her time attacking Trump or fact checking him constantly. She has to make her case not play Trump's mind games.
reply by karenina on 08-Sep-2024
    Sounds like the perfect plan to me.
    If she does not take his bait, he will be rattled.
Comment from SimianSavant
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[rating revised up after edits made by author]

This piece does not conform to the contest rules, as it is 4-7-7 instead of 5-7-7. Not sure how that got past the CEC, but now you know. You could make it "Harris/Trump says to Trump/Harris". Shoot me a message back if you fix it and I will adjust this up.

I suggest a new picture too, as you've used it before and now I know who the author is : )

Regards,

🦍

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    fixed both thanks
reply by SimianSavant on 09-Sep-2024
    It was still out of conformance when I looked at it yesterday, but today it is conforming and I bumped up the rating. 🦍
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I think you've caught the general message of each side. And reading it like this makes it feel so childish. Harris's line feels dismissive. Bringing up age is not something we do in America. While Trump's response is so aggressive and over the top. I think you've done a great job of sharing, at least for me, that we need more discussion about the policies and how each individual will help the country.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    hmm I might change that a bit I see you point