Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! The fool is left to ponder his actions in the quiet of the night. But what a lovely place you share! I love how you've shared the imagery of Galway Bay and the moon into your poem. The gentle rhythm make this piece feel amost serene. It's left me with a sense of peace and wonder. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
Thank you so much! I wish the form allowed me to add more stanzas.
Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely! This could almost comprise the lyrics to a song. It positively sings Ireland and the fondness you have for it. And that's before I listened to your video. Well done and good luck Debbie PS If you're not there at the moment, you're clearly very homesick:)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
Thank you so much! I wish the form allowed me to add more stanzas.