Feather in the Wind
Moving through life isn't always easy4 total reviews
Comment from patricia dillon
This is so true. I suppose we all like to feel like we plan things, but how much do we plan really? We are all just feathers in the wind. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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This is so true. I suppose we all like to feel like we plan things, but how much do we plan really? We are all just feathers in the wind. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely poem! And your picture is great - that feather has found stability where the wind had "pinned" it. Enjoyed your rhymes and the analogy you found in this sight of the feather lodged in the log.
Best wishes in the contest!
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What a lovely poem! And your picture is great - that feather has found stability where the wind had "pinned" it. Enjoyed your rhymes and the analogy you found in this sight of the feather lodged in the log.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet,
Though I think the idea to be a feather blowing in the wind is poetic , in real life I need order .
I'm a freak control and I need to know what is happening. To be happy I need to stay in my comfort zone.
Your poem will certainly appeal to those free spirited souls that what to spread their wings and go where the wind takes them .. daredevils, adventurers.
PS: you need to read the requirements again, a triolet has a specific format , with two lines that repeat and other rules.
I hope you can re capture the freedom vibe in the edit version.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Ciao mystery poet,
Though I think the idea to be a feather blowing in the wind is poetic , in real life I need order .
I'm a freak control and I need to know what is happening. To be happy I need to stay in my comfort zone.
Your poem will certainly appeal to those free spirited souls that what to spread their wings and go where the wind takes them .. daredevils, adventurers.
PS: you need to read the requirements again, a triolet has a specific format , with two lines that repeat and other rules.
I hope you can re capture the freedom vibe in the edit version.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much! I will change the rhyme!
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You did a great job, I like this edited version.
Best of luck!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures life with its gentle imagery of a feather drifting on the wind. I especially like how the poem shares a sense of movement. For me what I saw was the uncertainty of where life might lead us. I found this to be an enjoyable and moving poem.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures life with its gentle imagery of a feather drifting on the wind. I especially like how the poem shares a sense of movement. For me what I saw was the uncertainty of where life might lead us. I found this to be an enjoyable and moving poem.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you!!
