2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I don't like the idea of Grandma's hands being if frigid winds, but unfortunately, it's part of the world we live in. Our elderly should be taken care of. Often, they are cast aside. Thank you for sharing this very real poem and presentation with us.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I don't like the idea of Grandma's hands being if frigid winds, but unfortunately, it's part of the world we live in. Our elderly should be taken care of. Often, they are cast aside. Thank you for sharing this very real poem and presentation with us.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh loved this one!!
very interesting and thought-provoking
with the hands... and then talking about a tree (sorta)
i never thought of it like that before...
excellent imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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ooh loved this one!!
very interesting and thought-provoking
with the hands... and then talking about a tree (sorta)
i never thought of it like that before...
excellent imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so evocative of cold, stiffness and pain as grandma's hands seem to blend into nature's magnificent distortions and weather-battered form. I'm quite mesmerised by your visual and the whole presentation is a delight. Thanks for the share, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This is so evocative of cold, stiffness and pain as grandma's hands seem to blend into nature's magnificent distortions and weather-battered form. I'm quite mesmerised by your visual and the whole presentation is a delight. Thanks for the share, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
I can see the connection between an old gnarled tree and and the gnarled hands of the elderly. So it's a really good satori line Gypsy, I Was a bit puzzled for awhile, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I can see the connection between an old gnarled tree and and the gnarled hands of the elderly. So it's a really good satori line Gypsy, I Was a bit puzzled for awhile, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Brr! Frigid winds in winter means this grandma will have cold hands, too!!
In tai chi class, we clasp each other's hands to say thank you at the end of class. I always shock the others with my frigid hands!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Brr! Frigid winds in winter means this grandma will have cold hands, too!!
In tai chi class, we clasp each other's hands to say thank you at the end of class. I always shock the others with my frigid hands!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much. Big sis.
Love ❤️
Marival ❤️