Crazy
A day with a mentally ill Mother6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Congratulations on your first milestone post. You're very brave trying a contest right away. I retired a few years ago from a school where my first graders often took care of their mothers and their younger siblings. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Congratulations on your first milestone post. You're very brave trying a contest right away. I retired a few years ago from a school where my first graders often took care of their mothers and their younger siblings. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your response. I really appreciate it. I know sadly many mothers are not well enough to care for their children.
Comment from papa55mike
Welcome! All of the kids we know can't wait for the weekends, holidays, and summer break. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Welcome! All of the kids we know can't wait for the weekends, holidays, and summer break. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
Comment from Jes Derry
This is a raw, sad, yet beautiful too. The word choices draw the reader in. The lines flow well, carrying the reader along with ease. The emotions are palpable and create empathy in the reader. Welcome to the site.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This is a raw, sad, yet beautiful too. The word choices draw the reader in. The lines flow well, carrying the reader along with ease. The emotions are palpable and create empathy in the reader. Welcome to the site.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I look forward to reading everyone's work.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Ohh, a mentally ill mother would be absolutely terrible. I wouldn't wish that in anybody.
I enjoyed the insight this poem provided on something I had not contemplated before.
Nicely done!
D
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Ohh, a mentally ill mother would be absolutely terrible. I wouldn't wish that in anybody.
I enjoyed the insight this poem provided on something I had not contemplated before.
Nicely done!
D
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for reading my poem. Yes, a mentally ill mother was very traumatic. I appreciate your commenting.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! Well done! This poem is deeply moving. You share the the complex emotions of a child during a difficult time with family life. The repetition of daily routines adds to the weight of the emotional experience. For me I felt the heaviness of each day. I thought this was a touching and heartfelt poem. Beautifully written!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Congrats on your first post! Well done! This poem is deeply moving. You share the the complex emotions of a child during a difficult time with family life. The repetition of daily routines adds to the weight of the emotional experience. For me I felt the heaviness of each day. I thought this was a touching and heartfelt poem. Beautifully written!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Michael. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. I look forward to reading all the writings.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad poem about a child living with a Mother like this as you say there is no escape or choice for a 10 year old. Your poem is touching and well rhymed and I welcome you to Fanstory Jeanette, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This is a sad poem about a child living with a Mother like this as you say there is no escape or choice for a 10 year old. Your poem is touching and well rhymed and I welcome you to Fanstory Jeanette, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you Dolly!