Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well done. I thought the final line ties the poem together with a hopeful note. Foe me this is a beautiful reminder of how love can help us through the complexities of life. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
Comment from
papa55mike
Nobody really needs religion, just the love of Jesus Christ flowing throughout our lives. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
Thanks for positive review.