Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

I really love it when natures colours start to change as the weather begins to cool. I think cosy nights in in front of the television are my favourite times. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024

Thank you so much!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love the sights and sounds in this post to remind us that changes are taking place as Autumn shows its unwelcome face, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024

Thank you so much.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

A colorful haiku to summon in the approaching fall season with it's brilliant colors of oranges and yellows and the cooler nights as summer slips away. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024

Thanks so much--I appreciate it.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What an enjoyable haiku! The transition of seasons is captured beautifully through the changing colors. I like how you also included the honking geese! Lovely writing!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024

Thanks so much~the honking geese were not originally in the line, but as I was writing, I heard geese honking as they flew over and was inspired to include them. I appreciate your kind review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Falling, has the proper formatting and sends the motion into the season as the colors, sounds, and overall feel of the ambient atmosphere changes.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024

Thanks so much!