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A Poetic Idiot's Approach to Idioms

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Poems Based on Idioms!

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is a nicely written free verse poem, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. In the scripture, it says a good man fall seven times but he gets up again. I just pray that you will be able to keep on getting up. And that you don't have to fall a whole lot more. Patricia.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for the kind review! And yes, everyone falls but not everyone has the strength to get up and keep going! Have a great rest of your week,
    Best,
    Videl
Comment from Bill Schott
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This poem, Fall Seven Times Stand Up Eight, sees a man go through the worst there is of mostly self-inflicted errors yet choose life and possibilities over the door in the floor.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for the 6-stars! I'm glad you liked the poem - this one was a little challenging but nonetheless a fun write!
    Best,
    Videl