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forbidden fruit

(not what you thought)

2 total reviews 
Comment from papa55mike
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Well, nobody knows what the fruit really was, but I think it was a chocolate tree. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
    Thank you Mike. Cacao trees are a good choice for sure. 🦍
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile here and it begs the question, what do you do when you are hungry? I enjoyed this unique and clever write and humans were cursed from then on, a fun post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
    Thanks Dolly! Green Plantains are a truly accursed fruit. 🦍