Haiku(ripe berries)
Nature Haiku 3/5/33 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Mystery poet, I voted for this and came back to review. A perfect haiku that made me hungry for some ripened berries.
Sending you my best today as always, and my BERRY BEST wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Mystery poet, I voted for this and came back to review. A perfect haiku that made me hungry for some ripened berries.
Sending you my best today as always, and my BERRY BEST wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Great review & thanks for that vote. Zanya
Comment from jessizero
This was a great 3-5-3 haiku for the writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and the subject matter was perfect. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This was a great 3-5-3 haiku for the writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and the subject matter was perfect. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Ripe Berries, has the proper formatting and presents the long-awaited prize of juicy berries. Lucky birds will be the connoisseurs of plump presents.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This 3-5-3, Ripe Berries, has the proper formatting and presents the long-awaited prize of juicy berries. Lucky birds will be the connoisseurs of plump presents.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks for reading Zanya
