The End of an Autumn Day
Hailu* 5-7-5 poem (late autumn sunset)2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A vibrant Haiku filled the magic of a sunset and the ambient colour that we associated with suns setting on the horizon, I enjoyed the experience here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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A vibrant Haiku filled the magic of a sunset and the ambient colour that we associated with suns setting on the horizon, I enjoyed the experience here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thanks Dolly! Pleased you enjoyed the experience. Hope your upcoming day will have that sunset.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
The way you describe the sunset painting the sky bright orange is so vivid and lovely. The line "peeks for tomorrow" adds a nice touch of hope, hinting that even as the day ends, there's something to look forward to. It flows nicely and has a calm, reflective vibe.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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The way you describe the sunset painting the sky bright orange is so vivid and lovely. The line "peeks for tomorrow" adds a nice touch of hope, hinting that even as the day ends, there's something to look forward to. It flows nicely and has a calm, reflective vibe.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thanks for your kind remarks. So pleased that you liked my last line. Your interpretation of this was in line with my thinking.