The Silver Unicorn
fantasy6 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Fantasy and the land of mystic magic...who would not like to step out their weary shoes and ride on a silver unicorn. You painted a beautiful picture with your words and I can imagine young children falling in love with the idea.
Smiles, Carol
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Fantasy and the land of mystic magic...who would not like to step out their weary shoes and ride on a silver unicorn. You painted a beautiful picture with your words and I can imagine young children falling in love with the idea.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from pome lover
well, wouldn't we all love to have a silver unicorn to ride and escape our lives for a bit. I can imagine yours as a nursing home nurse has plenty of sadness involved and is tiring.This is a"release" poem, which is good.
One small suggestion, in the 2nd line, hearts should be singular. Other than that, a neat poem.
Katharine
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well, wouldn't we all love to have a silver unicorn to ride and escape our lives for a bit. I can imagine yours as a nursing home nurse has plenty of sadness involved and is tiring.This is a"release" poem, which is good.
One small suggestion, in the 2nd line, hearts should be singular. Other than that, a neat poem.
Katharine
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from RodG
Who has not fantasized about taming a beautiful unicorn and riding him off to magical lands? Young readers will enjoy this short poem because you describe the adventures so well. Rod
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Who has not fantasized about taming a beautiful unicorn and riding him off to magical lands? Young readers will enjoy this short poem because you describe the adventures so well. Rod
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
I seldom to almost never read poetry, other than the few I've been reading for years. But I'm glad to have stumbled across your post and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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I seldom to almost never read poetry, other than the few I've been reading for years. But I'm glad to have stumbled across your post and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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I placed third in the contest. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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Congratulations of your ribbon!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem paints a magical picture! The change from despair to delight is beautifully shared. After reading it I feel like I was part of a journey into a world of fantasy and wonder.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Your poem paints a magical picture! The change from despair to delight is beautifully shared. After reading it I feel like I was part of a journey into a world of fantasy and wonder.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Glad you enjoyed my fantasy poem. Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This poem drifts into a fantasy world here and I enjoyed the rest from reality whilst reading this tantalising poem filled with magical dreaming, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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This poem drifts into a fantasy world here and I enjoyed the rest from reality whilst reading this tantalising poem filled with magical dreaming, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you. Elaine
