Goodnight Sweet Summer
Until next year...18 total reviews
Comment from royowen
An excellent 5/7/5 Kartiemae, the soft narrative makes it doubly pleasant to read, and its gentle message is a succour to the soul, and lovely entry in this contest, and deserving post, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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An excellent 5/7/5 Kartiemae, the soft narrative makes it doubly pleasant to read, and its gentle message is a succour to the soul, and lovely entry in this contest, and deserving post, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Roy for your lovely comments and review
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Welcome
Comment from Ulla
Yes in many places summer is at its end. Here in the part of Spain where I live, we will still enjoy a few more weeks of it, sometimes it even goes on well into October. We'll see. I loved your 5-7-5 poem for the contest. Good luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Yes in many places summer is at its end. Here in the part of Spain where I live, we will still enjoy a few more weeks of it, sometimes it even goes on well into October. We'll see. I loved your 5-7-5 poem for the contest. Good luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review
Comment from karenina
I've got to believe old Will smiles when we give a nod to his brilliance. This is a great photo with quiet, elegant, pensive, ethereal words to match! I very much enjoyed it!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I've got to believe old Will smiles when we give a nod to his brilliance. This is a great photo with quiet, elegant, pensive, ethereal words to match! I very much enjoyed it!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much karenina. It's good to hear from you! Thanks for your lovely comments and review!
Katherine
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I've been off FS more than on lately. Sorry I've missed so much. I'm attempting to get back in the swing of things!
Comment from Harry Craft
Nice 5-7-5 structure poem! I like the meaning. I always hate to see summer end. My favorite time of year. However, the fall is always nice too. Good message here. Nice work and great photo!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Nice 5-7-5 structure poem! I like the meaning. I always hate to see summer end. My favorite time of year. However, the fall is always nice too. Good message here. Nice work and great photo!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Harry! So glad you liked it!
Katherine
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You are so welcome Katherine!
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This is like a soft farewell to summer. The imagery of autumn's gentle winds carrying summer off to rest feels peaceful and natural, like the changing of the seasons. It has a lullaby quality to it, making it feel like a calm and comforting transition. Your simple wording add to the beauty of the sentiment.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This is like a soft farewell to summer. The imagery of autumn's gentle winds carrying summer off to rest feels peaceful and natural, like the changing of the seasons. It has a lullaby quality to it, making it feel like a calm and comforting transition. Your simple wording add to the beauty of the sentiment.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review Patty!
Katiemae1977
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a lovely 575. Zephyr has always been a favorite word of mine. I liked it so much, it's what I named my first horse!
A lovely description of the turnover of seasons. Best of luck, Julie.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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This is a lovely 575. Zephyr has always been a favorite word of mine. I liked it so much, it's what I named my first horse!
A lovely description of the turnover of seasons. Best of luck, Julie.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much for your review and good luck wishes Julie!
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved this piece, and how you are saying goodnight to summer. I think there are still a couple more weeks before autumn really begins to settle in, but I am beginning to feel it. I really enjoyed reading this piece.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I loved this piece, and how you are saying goodnight to summer. I think there are still a couple more weeks before autumn really begins to settle in, but I am beginning to feel it. I really enjoyed reading this piece.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Jacob!
Comment from Val Crisson
Beautiful entry with so much to say, though this summer has been brutal many wil miss it. Love the use of the word zephyrs in the seconc line. It so describes Fall breezes to me. Good luch with the contest
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Beautiful entry with so much to say, though this summer has been brutal many wil miss it. Love the use of the word zephyrs in the seconc line. It so describes Fall breezes to me. Good luch with the contest
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much Val for your review and good luck wishes!
Comment from Begin Again
What an awesome picture (it's colors tease of the autumn colors) blended with your gentle farewell to summer. It's absolutely stunning! I wish you the very best in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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What an awesome picture (it's colors tease of the autumn colors) blended with your gentle farewell to summer. It's absolutely stunning! I wish you the very best in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Many thanks Carol for your lovely review and good luck wishes!
Take care.
Comment from gansach
This is a gorgeous presentation for the 5-7-5 writing prompt entry. The artwork is perfect to depict a retiring summer season as cooler autumn weather arrives to take over~a changing of the guard. Nicely worded and well done!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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This is a gorgeous presentation for the 5-7-5 writing prompt entry. The artwork is perfect to depict a retiring summer season as cooler autumn weather arrives to take over~a changing of the guard. Nicely worded and well done!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and super review!
Take care.