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Too Much of a Good Thing?

Kanae take any Mora?

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Comment from Julie Helms
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If one only ever had poetry experience from Fanstory, they would definitely conclude the 575 was for some reason dominant and sacred.
They all start sounding very much the same after while. I like that you lampoon them.
Best to you,
Julie

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
    Thanks, Julie.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Too Much of a Good Thing, has the proper formatting and seems to suggest that this form of poetic reflection cab reach a vanishing point.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
    Thank you.
Comment from lancellot
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Funny, I know exactly what you mean by this. I have often wondered how many times we can see these same two contest.

Suggestion:

Haiku. Senryu. = 4 syllables
-or-
Haiku or Senryu = 5 syllables

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
    Thank you.