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Instrument

Organs make such melodic melodies

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This story, Instrument, presents the speakers body parts over to whomever it is who will expose the real or symbolic organs and find what music can be produced.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024

Comment from papa55mike
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The pain people cause others can seem like a torturous song played with the pain left behind. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024