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Psalms

Psalms is my favorite book in the Bible

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Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Brenda,
Your spiritual poetry contains precepts we can all live by. Sometimes kindness is paid with meanness, because some people view kindness as a weakness. I don't. (My living situation is not ideal, but I cope by reading and writing on this site). There are many kind people on Fanstory.
Wonderful words to live by Brenda,
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2024


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Comment from jaded831
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I do pray everyday. I try to treat others like I would like to be treated, somehow that has gotten lost in today's world. Your poem reminds us of that. The only thing I would change is the word quality, I feel should be added to the line that comes before.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024


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Comment from lyenochka
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The Psalms are a source of "soothing" words and we in turn can bless others with our words. Your acrostic gives us good ways to follow the LORD by prayer and loving others. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


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Comment from shelley kaye
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*the "L" line is 2 lines - the word quality got dropped down.
Pray everyday for our world
Show compassion and kindness to others
Always treat others as you want to be treated
Love is God's greatest
quality
Many people are hoping for peace
Soothing words help those in need

other than that typo... a nice psalms acrostic
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


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Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic poem, Psalms, has the proper vertical formatting and reminds the readers that the general thrust of the Bibles purpose is to bring the world together in the spirit of brotherhood and decency.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024


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Comment from Nicki.B
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This a lovely faithful message go all. If there were more prayers to God, there may be less negative energies in this world. Beautiful imagery and presentation. Well done

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem is beautifully heartfelt. Each line in your poem seems to offer a gentle reminder of how we can help one another. It's a touching poem with a wonderful message. Thank you for sharing it!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


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Comment from mermaids
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Psalms are also my favorite book of the Bible, I read them frequently. "Love is God's greatest quality" is a perfect use of words that speaks to the reader. Your acrostic form gives good wisdom to the reader and is an excellent faith based poem.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


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Comment from LJbutterfly
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Psalms is also one of my favorite books in the Bible. For your Bible Acrostic Poem contest entry, you have provided some of the most meaningful statements humans should ascribe to, to insure a faithful life in God's grace and love. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


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    Thank you so much.