2024 Gypsy's Tanka
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9 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL Black Labradors are difficult to say goodbye too. We had one and a yellow Labrador too. Wonderful dogs. Actually, my favorite breed. Both were raised with my boys. Wonderful poem. I got stuck on the saying goodbye to the dog.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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LOL Black Labradors are difficult to say goodbye too. We had one and a yellow Labrador too. Wonderful dogs. Actually, my favorite breed. Both were raised with my boys. Wonderful poem. I got stuck on the saying goodbye to the dog.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. We just got a female dog, Muffing, she is very cute and barks a lot ... lol ... we got her at our local animal rescue. She is a terrier and other mix.
Gypsy 😊
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Give your dog a hug from me. My Harley is a barker.
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh nice twist at the end
it's always hard saying goodbye to a pet
even if it's just for awhile...
well-written tanka with great imagery, smooth flow, and totally cute pics!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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ooh nice twist at the end
it's always hard saying goodbye to a pet
even if it's just for awhile...
well-written tanka with great imagery, smooth flow, and totally cute pics!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I myself remember my great uncle's farm of cocoa, it was always a time of pleasure and great memories. This poem brought me back to that place, and is very relatable. I love your bright colors and the overall mood of the verses.
RJ
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I myself remember my great uncle's farm of cocoa, it was always a time of pleasure and great memories. This poem brought me back to that place, and is very relatable. I love your bright colors and the overall mood of the verses.
RJ
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. Haiku should make you pause and think about the satori so I am happy my haiku brought good memories.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much, RJ. Haiku should make you pause and think about the satori so I am happy my haiku brought good memories.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Katiemae1977
Aw how cute this is. Lovely tanka with great imagery, good connection between lines, especially your pivot line. Nice sentiment as well with thr farm dog.
Well done
Katherine
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Aw how cute this is. Lovely tanka with great imagery, good connection between lines, especially your pivot line. Nice sentiment as well with thr farm dog.
Well done
Katherine
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Katiemae.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much, Katiemae.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
I get this one. Sometimes a dog is more than just a friendly dog. He or she can be a soul mate. They know what we need and exactly how to give it. Beautiful and heartwarming. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I get this one. Sometimes a dog is more than just a friendly dog. He or she can be a soul mate. They know what we need and exactly how to give it. Beautiful and heartwarming. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Dogs are smart and loyal. We just got one, she is a great addition to our family.
Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
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Dogs are smart and loyal. We just got one, she is a great addition to our family.
Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Love the illustration. And how could anyone say goodbye to that trusty friend? A vivid little story captured in that limited syllable form. Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Love the illustration. And how could anyone say goodbye to that trusty friend? A vivid little story captured in that limited syllable form. Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, that's always hard to say goodbye to a good fur buddy! Thanks for the great thought. So much to say goodbye to when school starts - especially the sleeping in part.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Yes, that's always hard to say goodbye to a good fur buddy! Thanks for the great thought. So much to say goodbye to when school starts - especially the sleeping in part.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you, big sister. I hope you are well.
love,
MariVal ❤️😘😊
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Thank you, big sister. I hope you are well.
love,
MariVal ❤️😘😊
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The overall structure seems good and the subject matter interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The overall structure seems good and the subject matter interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I enjoyed the sentiment here in your unique post with a touch of humour, you made me smile here and I enjoyed this skilful post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Ha ha ha, I enjoyed the sentiment here in your unique post with a touch of humour, you made me smile here and I enjoyed this skilful post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
